I really like this one Chris. I don't usually like mixed up rhyme schemes, but it seems to work perfectly here. I think it actually adds a certain discordance and feeling of change that depicts the autumn and also the bombastic trumpetty words also reflect the gustiness of autumn together with the spikey alliteration. I just wonder if the last verse line 2 does owe something to 'Wuthering Heights'. There is one line which I don't like all that much in v3 line 1 but again I am being picky this is a great poem.
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